Sandwich Thief
As I hurried down the hall with a sandwich at hand I realized I
had to hide it, or Kris would hunt me down. I noticed the white door of the
science lab ahead and decided that would be a good place to hide. There
was a battery cabinet in the corner. I would hide there with the sandwich. As I shut
the door I heard Kris come in. He peeked around and left. I ate his
sandwich and fell asleep. When I woke up I felt energetic enough to do
what had to be done, tell him why I stole his sandwich.
It is evident that you have spent time and effort on your writing this week. Much better on punctuation and making sure all parts of your story make sense. Keep it up.
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