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100 wc week #12


Sandwich Thief



As I hurried down the hall with a sandwich at hand I realized I had to hide it, or Kris would hunt me down.  I noticed the white door of the science lab ahead and decided that would be a good place to hide.  There was a battery cabinet in the corner.  I would hide there with the sandwich.  As I shut the door I heard Kris come in.  He peeked around and left.  I ate his sandwich and fell asleep.  When I woke up I felt energetic enough to do what had to be done, tell him why I stole his sandwich. 

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  1. It is evident that you have spent time and effort on your writing this week. Much better on punctuation and making sure all parts of your story make sense. Keep it up.

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