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100wc week#13


                                        A day at the zoo


“Those teeth are really big,” said Josh. “That’s ok just as long as we don’t fall into their pen” I said. And then it happened.  When I came too, Josh was crumpled beside me. I looked left and then right. The tiger was blocking our escape. I called for help but no answer. I looked up but there was no one there, I called for help again but still no answer. I grabbed a stick as the tiger crept closer. I didn’t know what to do. Suddenly the tiger leaped towards us and just missed us and cracked the wall.

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  1. Unknown8 December 2017 at 21:04

    It is really hard to ready your writing with black text on grey background. Please change this in your settings. You have been working hard on editing and revising.

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  2. Unknown9 December 2017 at 11:46

    Well done

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  3. Apple sucks10 December 2017 at 08:57

    you have to repost these comments on the 100wc week#13 redo

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