the ultimate capture the flag
"but where will we hide it all." i said. We were walking down a trail because we were playing a huge game of capture the flag when we saw a enemy we through a mud ball and ran. When we stopped we found a abandon mall. "I think we should hide it in here." I said. So we found a arcade and hid it. when we saw some of our team mates we unlocked the doors and let them in and locked the doors. The other team got in without us noticing grabbed the flag ran back and one.
"but where will we hide it all." i said. We were walking down a trail because we were playing a huge game of capture the flag when we saw a enemy we through a mud ball and ran. When we stopped we found a abandon mall. "I think we should hide it in here." I said. So we found a arcade and hid it. when we saw some of our team mates we unlocked the doors and let them in and locked the doors. The other team got in without us noticing grabbed the flag ran back and one.
I think you may have a more interesting story if you set the entire capture the flag game in the abandon mall instead of introducing the trail and mud ball. You are missing some important capitals. Remember that if a word starts with a vowel and you are using a you need to use an. For example an enemy, an abandon, an arcade.
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