Mr.p the mystery man:
Mr.p has never left his house, not even to get mail. we thought he had a dog, until last week. the dog on the phone. I know what you`re thinking how would a dog be on the phone. well here`s how I saw him on the phone, it was last week when I was closing my window to go to bed when I saw the dog on the phone and the dog was wearing glasses so I went to bed. now you`re caught up, MR.P has invited me for some tea so I walked over, and he was a dog it was odd but cool to meet.
An interesting idea. Be sure to read it out loud as I had trouble understanding the second sentence as I think you are missing some key words. Don't forget that all sentences begin with a capital. Watch for run on sentences.
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