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100 wc week #6


the crazy day

"Ah finally it`s done." I had finally finished my statue when the cops arrived and a kid yelled "it was that man." Then one of the cops walked up to me and said " Your under arrest for murder." And so the next day I went to the judge and told him 
" Iet me me show you that it`s not a person." So the judge took me to the scene and I pulled out the legs and weights were attached so I was set free and told to tell the cops before I do that again so I did it.

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  1. Unknown18 October 2017 at 11:21

    A good story with a beginning, middle and end. Read your story out loud to a peer and to an adult. One thing to work on is punctuation for when people are talking. Every time a new person speaks start a new line. You are missing some capitals too. With some editing you will have a great piece of writing.

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